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ABBY DAVIES EDITORIAL

THRILLER,DYSTOPIAN & HORROR FICTION EDITOR

Developmental editing and manuscript assessments for adult & YA thrillers, dystopian and horror fiction.

AN EDITOR WHO UNDERSTANDS WRITERS

Because I'm one too.

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As a published novelist and professional fiction editor, I understand what it takes to turn a manuscript into a story readers don't want to put down.

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I specialise in thrillers, dystopian and horror fiction, working with both adult and YA writers.

PUBLISHED AUTHOR. EXPERIENCED EDITOR.

I know what it feels like to hand your novel to an editor. I also know what a good editor can do for it.

I've written six novels, including two psychological thrillers published by HarperCollins, and I've spent the last few years helping other writers strengthen their own work as an editor for Jericho Writers.

I've completed more than 85 professional manuscript assessments, working closely with writers on everything from structure, character and pacing to tension, clarity and the small details that can make a story come alive.

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EDITORIAL SERVICES

Thoughtful, honest editorial support to help you make your novel the strongest version of itself.

OPENING CHAPTERS ASSESSMENT

A focused assessment of your first 20,000 words, looking at character, voice, pacing, tension and how effectively your opening draws the reader into the story.

BEST FOR: Writers who want to know whether their opening grabs the reader and what could make it stronger.

£295
MANUSCRIPT ASSESSMENT

A detailed assessment of your complete manuscript, with an in-depth editorial report of around 3,500 words covering structure, character, plot, pacing, tension, voice and the areas that could make your novel stronger.

BEST FOR: Writers who have completed a novel and want expert guidance on what is working and what needs strengthening.

FROM £495
DEVELOPMENTAL EDIT

An in-depth edit of your complete manuscript, combining a detailed editorial report with extensive comments throughout the manuscript to help you strengthen the story at every level.

BEST FOR: Writers who want detailed, hands-on editorial guidance throughout their manuscript plus an overall assessment.

FROM £995
SUBMISSION PACKAGE REVIEW

Detailed feedback on your query letter, synopsis and first 5,000 words, helping you make your submission as strong and compelling as possible before approaching agents.

BEST FOR: Writers preparing to approach literary agents and wanting their submission to make the strongest possible impression.

£225

WHAT WRITERS SAY

What writers say about working with me.

“The feedback from Abby was both richly detailed, relating to individual words, and also very constructive regarding the overall story/plot. The finished book will be far better for having Abby’s input and I am very grateful for her work.”

Mark B

“I could not have asked for a more attentive reading of my novel. Abby’s commentary was clear and enhanced with many examples to illustrate her points. She leaves you with a strong sense of direction that motivates you to revise your manuscript. With Abby’s input, you know where to start and exactly what to do.”

Anonymous

Editorial work carried out through Jericho Writers. Testimonials reproduced with permission.

I was very pleased to read the thorough and detailed editorial report on my manuscript. I agree with all your suggestions for improvement, and I'm excited at the prospect of making adjustments, rewriting and creating new scenes.

Janet W

READY TO MAKE YOUR
MANUSCRIPT STRONGER?

Tell me a little about your novel and what kind of editorial support you're looking for. I'll come back to you with my availability and a quote.

I look forward to hearing about your book.

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